Messed this one up :(

So I was working on a pin up. Guess my hearts not in it today as I ended up messing this piece up.
It was rushed, sloppy and not to a good standard. It was supposed to be some fan art of Flammy from TOME,

Meh. We all have off days. I belive I will post some studies up tomorrow. I have not done hands in a long time.